hello friends I have a poem that I wrote originally in Spanish, but I've translated for you, I know it is not very good, I hope you like it and give their opinions thank´s.
She was.
The doors of sadness my heart beat, She looked at me and shot the spark of love, was beautiful smile and soft skin her body was sweet taste of honey,
when our lips met was recited as a poem, the same touch than cotton and rich flavor of peach,
she was like a beautiful princess that always smelled of strawberry, her walk was such a distinguished never in my mind fell into oblivion,
his speech came to hypnotize me, never stop loving pus, I owned her heart and she's really my biggest dream,
she was the most beautiful goddess, what would one day be my wife, but fate separated me from his side, cruel is not to be with someone you loved so much,
the day is at our meeting, increasingly stronger note in the wind, my passion for it lives on my inside, never change what I feel for her.
the original poem in Spanish
Ella era.
Las puertas de la tristeza golpeaban mi corazón, ella me miro y se disparo la chispa del amor, era de bella sonrisa y suave piel, su dulce cuerpo era de sabor a miel,
cuando nuestros labios se encontraban era como una poesía que recitaban, de igual tacto que el algodón y de rico sabor a melocotón,
ella era como una bella princesa que siempre olía a fresa, su caminar era tan distinguido que nunca en mi mente cayó en el olvido,
su hablar me llego a hipnotizar, nunca la podre dejar de amar, yo de su corazón era dueño y ella la realidad de mi mayor sueño,
ella era la diosa mas hermosa, la que un día seria mi esposa, pero el destino me separo de su lado, cruel es no estar con alguien que tanto has amado,
se acerca el día de nuestro encuentro, cada vez se nota mas fuerte en el viento, mi pasión por ella sigue viva en mi adentro, nunca cambiara lo que yo por ella siento.
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Hey! don't say that it's not good! what's important is that you enjoyed writing it. That's what counts.
[quote=SadieMercier]Hey! don't say that it's not good! what's important is that you enjoyed writing it. That's what counts. :)[/quote]
thank you very much :)
Hey! don't say that it's not good! what's important is that you enjoyed writing it. That's what counts.
thank you very much
[quote=SadieMercier]Hey! don't say that it's not good! what's important is that you enjoyed writing it. That's what counts. :)[/quote]
I totally agree, art is very subjective hehe i'd like to read it in spanish :)
Hey! don't say that it's not good! what's important is that you enjoyed writing it. That's what counts.
I totally agree, art is very subjective hehe i'd like to read it in spanish
[quote=Paola][quote=SadieMercier]Hey! don't say that it's not good! what's important is that you enjoyed writing it. That's what counts. :)[/quote]
I totally agree, art is very subjective hehe i'd like to read it in spanish :)[/quote]
no problem, now I add to post ;)
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thank you very much
I totally agree, art is very subjective hehe i'd like to read it in spanish
no problem, now I add to post