Before showing them my poem, I want to clarify that the original one is written in Spanish and a friend me translated it. So it is probable that there is something that they do not understand or seems to them to be strange. It is one of simpler that I have.
The precious victim
A rose fell from the sky leafless
I asked myself why it happened? A virgin is in love?
If the rain carries scented flowers
and then returns the withered flowers and faded?
If the birds pull their thin skin
after dropping his battered beauty?
If the wind struck their roots and made her his enemy?
If roses are born ill of heaven,
over time grow with defects,
Then they produce a large fall
In the fertile land and they gather life
And it didn’t fall where she wanted?
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[quote=simonacalbi]Lovely, however Spanish is not allowed here. We are an English content only site.
If you want to post in Spanish, please use Taringa.net
Thanks![/quote]
I'm sorry. I wanted to post the original and show the rhyme of the poem.
Now I remove the text.
Lovely, however Spanish is not allowed here. We are an English content only site.
If you want to post in Spanish, please use Taringa.net
Thanks!
I'm sorry. I wanted to post the original and show the rhyme of the poem. Now I remove the text.
[quote=SiennaHerman]i really enjoyed your poetry and maybe one day i will learn spanish![/quote]
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Thanx
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If you want to post in Spanish, please use Taringa.net
Thanks!
I'm sorry. I wanted to post the original and show the rhyme of the poem.
Now I remove the text.
Thanx